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a dream away
Contributed by
rambo56
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Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 03:59:03 AM in AEST
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i had a lovely vision while asleep one night
of a land so faraway where everything was bright
everthing was peaceful there wasnt any sound
with grass as soft as velvet growing all around
lots and lots of flowers growing wild and free
showing of there colors as lovely as can be
there were lots of bluebirds flying in the sky
singing songs of love as they went flying bye
this land it was beautiful and just a dream away
and if this dream came true there i would long to stay
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Re: a dream away
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 05:01:18 AM AEST
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| I love the way your poems rhyme and flow so easily, simple and effective writing, I love it! |
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Re: a dream away
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 07:50:36 AM AEST
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| If only such a place existed outside of our dreams and imaginations. what a beautiful place this would be to live. Very beautiful poem!! |
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