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Smile, For Your Sake
Contributed by
the_unknown
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Sunday, 6th June 2010 @ 10:59:12 PM in AEST
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ambiguous
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I want to talk about it, because it's the only thing on my mind
It's all I can think of, it's killing me inside
You don't even have the slightest clue, do you?
I want to rip myself open, expose my deepest and darkest
I want to become vulnerable, to you
But I already am, and I'm on a breakdown
I need your answers, quick
I need your comfort, now
I need you here, right by my side
No words from my mouth can come
An overwhelming silence breaks through my thoughts
I can't ask you, I can't tell you, I can't hurt you
I can't mention these accusations or feelings
There's nothing I can do
Except pull up my big girl pants, and smile
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2010-06-06 22:59:12]
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Re: Smile, For Your Sake
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by Mars on
Sunday, 6th June 2010 @ 11:16:07 PM AEST
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Desire. I don't know what to say.
Is desire a good or bad thing? Are we subjected to desire, or do we do the wanting ourselves?
I am not sure, though desire can be quite taxing. Take care. |
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Re: Smile, For Your Sake
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 12:37:42 AM AEST
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Quite the dilemma going on with this one and definitely relatable, from any gender's point of view.
Nicely done,
Thank you,
Tim
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