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Where are you
Contributed by
Grace_and_Glory
on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 12:47:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Where are you? Out there breathing right now. Why can’t I find you? I want to know you are far away, I need to know where you are! You follow me through my day, like a shadow, dark, you steal my thoughts away. You are a thief, don’t you know? Do you ever think of me, wherever you are? Your memory is penetrating, your being is a violation. It’s not right. Are you happy, do you have a family now, do they know what you are? Which memory defines you, all the times we spent together, the way you looked in my eyes, did our friendship mean nothing to you, all the time we spent together? You would come over, you wouldn’t knock, just walk in, you and your haircuts and random visits. Nights spent studying, talking about deep things; we fit together and it was a safe friendship, wasn’t it? I would have done anything for you, except that, but you took it anyway. Like it was trash, something to taste and throw away. And I was left an empty shell. You are a thief, and you got away with the prize. And who am I, left obsessed with you while you are off living your life mindless of the way you tore me apart. You, you will always hold a piece of me, and I am powerless to get it back. How am I suppose to fill this hole you’ve left? I don’t want to carry this piece of you with me forever. Where can I leave this filth I hold? Why must I carry you in my mind, while you live on mindless of me? Part of me will always care for you, for the memories that were you before you took so selfishly from me. I loved you, didn’t you know?
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Re: Where are you
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 08:50:08 PM AEST
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| I like it. My only suggestion here is that you break it up into two paragraphs for ease of reading. |
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Re: Where are you
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by Grace_and_Glory on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 09:58:33 PM AEST
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| Good idea thanks, I need to do that with more of my stuff instead of it being one giant word vomit! :) |
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