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The Greatest Feeling
Contributed by
jdwright
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Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 03:21:00 AM in AEST
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The Greatest Feeling
I’ve discovered that there’s an amazing feeling that exists out there
It’s a feeling like no other it’s the greatest and most rare
There’s nothing else quite like it or that can even compare
The fact most will never know it is extremely unfair
We journey through this thing called life usually alone and unaware
That there might be someone who truly gets us that with we can share
Many times we fool ourselves wanting this or that believing they care
Only to find out in the end we are left alone in our despair
But if and when you feel that feeling and you know it’s there
The look in each other’s eye when you really know it share
The Feeling that over comes you is beyond all compare
Knowing you’re understood and not alone feels so very rare
The unspoken understandings and the personal things that are there
The little secrets you have that of everyone else is unaware
That feeling of connection and the strength that it helps you share
Makes everything else in life small no matter what you bear
The feeling that someone gets you and beside you is always there
That’s truly the Greatest Feeling nothing else can compare
Even if it doesn’t last forever embellish it while you’re there
Because when it’s gone your heart will surely tear
You will search for it because without it now life is hard to bear
You don’t know how you lived without it before is unfair
You may even loose a little of yourself totally unaware
That you truly had a small piece of heaven that you got to share
To find it again never you will most definitely swear
Destined to roam alone again your heart you wish to spare
Scared to trust that the feeling was even really there
To imagine it could happen again is difficult when it’s so very rare
The simple truth in all of this in love all is fair
You take a chance with your heart every time you care
But to feel the Greatest Feeling you must always beware
The Best of Life comes when you find someone with to share
JD Wright
05/29/2010
JD Wright, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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Re: The Greatest Feeling
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by haymanali on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 03:30:33 AM AEST
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"We journey through this thing called life usually alone and unaware
That there might be someone who truly gets us that with we can share"
Eloquent lines well penned. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Greatest Feeling
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by DrcGaimer on
Saturday, 5th June 2010 @ 07:50:33 AM AEST
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| Very insightful and very true. Nice write. |
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