|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Weeping Willow
Contributed by
fand10
on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 03:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
|
Weeping Willow,
What can I do?
Their love for me isn't true.
Oh Weeping willow,
Why don't they care?
They lock me away in my world of despair.
Ah Weeping willow,
how can they not see?
A never ending love, they have from me.
My Weeping willow,
I begin to fear.
My words of undying love, they will not hear!
Weep, Weeping willow,
Weep for me.
I'm such a fool, why can't I see?
fand10, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.
Copyright ©
fand10
... [
2010-06-03 15:06:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Weeping Willow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 08:08:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| So sad, yet so beautifully written. It's so sad when people don't see what's rite in front of them. I can really feel the emotions in this poem. Great job!! |
|
|
Re: Weeping Willow
(User Rating: 1 )
by storeya on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 09:23:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| you took my mood for the last month, and put it into an art form! kudos! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
