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Erased Fingerprints
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 07:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Life lines slowly die,
worn down by life's turbulence,
conformity kills.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-06-02 19:45:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Erased Fingerprints
(User Rating: 1 ) by fish on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 05:04:07 PM AEST (User
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your compressed way of writing is so so charming, i love it.
the message here is big and the words few but the sense abundantly made. nice piece keep it up. |
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