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I'll Wait for You
Contributed by
bunit682
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 02:33:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I'm with you time stands still,
the sands in the hourglass clog and nothing seems real.
Am I dreaming? Oh I wish to never wake if that's the case,
Cause my days have no meaning unless I see your face.
But this dream has no great conclusion,
because in real life I have just ended up losing.
Were friends, so I'll have to suffer,
Cause I've fallen for you but you have feelings for another.
I once read a quote that has to be true without a doubt
Never give up on anything that you can't go a day without thinking about
And you I can not ever.
I'd wait for you forever.
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Re: I'll Wait for You
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 09:09:08 AM AEST
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| Such a beautiful, yet tragic poem. Unrequited love hurts. I know all to well. But I love how this poem speaks of holding onto hope. You did a fantastic job with this!! |
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Re: I'll Wait for You
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 11:14:13 AM AEST
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| this is a lovely poem, albeit quite sad, but the words of this poem lead us to believe in hope always, really well done. |
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Re: I'll Wait for You
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by Poetry4fun on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 10:16:30 PM AEST
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| I like the way it starts and begins to get sad. Great piece of work! |
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