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love lies bleeding
Contributed by
rambo56
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 09:53:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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a broken heart lies bleeding when its love as gone
shattered in to pieces with no strength to carry on
feeling lots of pain broken on the floor
the love that it once had is not there any more
the happiness it knew as turned in to a frown
the beat that it once carried is slowly breaking down
though if you give it time one day it will heal
then your heart will mend and change the way the feel.
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rambo56
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2010-06-02 09:53:07]
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Re: love lies bleeding
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 12:48:18 PM AEST
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| I really like your style and the way your poems flow and ryme. well done again. |
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Re: love lies bleeding
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by DayLilly on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 09:38:44 PM AEST
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| oh wow... beautiful. that's all i can say:) |
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