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Sometimes I Wish....
Contributed by
ExoM
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Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 10:06:08 PM in AEST
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Maybe sometimes I wish I were a bird
So I could fly away and leave you all behind.
Maybe sometimes I wish I were a tortoise.
Then I could tuck away in my shell
Whenever I don't want to hear it.
Maybe sometimes I wish I were a pencil
Always sharp and to the point.
Maybe sometimes I wish I were rich
That way i could replace heartbreak with money.
Maybe sometimes I wish there was no war
And no premature diabetes.
Maybe sometimes I think I see things, hear things
That are too good to be true.
"Maybe sometimes" just doesn't cut it
For those of us who breathe in reality
Because this world is brimming with opportunity
And for those who doubt, it is a brutality.
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ExoM
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2010-06-01 22:06:08]
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Re: Sometimes I Wish....
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 11:11:51 PM AEST
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| Great write,pondering life, imagery conveying thought processes leading to a final conclusion that challenges and packs a punch |
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Re: Sometimes I Wish....
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 03:10:48 AM AEST
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this is a very nice well expressed poem.
the images you bring to the surface are very real. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sometimes I Wish....
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by Avataar on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 09:35:53 AM AEST
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| Nice poem...a lot depends on our outlook on life...accepting reality and dealing with it positively is what makes life worthwhile |
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