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barley field
Contributed by
rambo56
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Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 09:39:10 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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i wandered through the barley so beautiful and gold
so wonderful to touch so wonderful to hold
underneath the sun growing oh so high
standing very upright reaching for the sky
growing very free growing in the wild
looking very lovely so gentle meek and mild
such a lovely site and growing oh so tall
the day i walked through barley is a day i will recall.
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Re: barley field
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by Debris on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 09:45:41 AM AEST
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A nice, pleasant poem. I enjoyed it.
My only constructive advice would be to watch the punctuation. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: barley field
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 03:28:05 AM AEST
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| a lovely simple gentle piece of writing.i love it. |
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