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To You, My Father
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 09:03:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Your laugh is rough,
Almost unnatural;
It rings in my ears,
Like a shrill bell it chimes---
Yet I find it beautiful.
You are my father
And though stern,
With love you guide me----
Your laughter a mark of affection.
Without you I'd be lost,
A part of myself missing;
I would not be complete---
A daughter with only a mother.
Thank you dad
For being my protector,
And my friend------
Your laughter leads me home.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-06-01 09:03:48]
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Re: To You, My Father
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by rambo56 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 03:13:05 PM AEST
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| lovely write nice poem |
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Re: To You, My Father
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST
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| Nicely put. Good stuff. |
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Re: To You, My Father
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 07:32:34 PM AEST
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With so many angry young-uns now days, I was really happy to see this. A perfect dedication.
Tim
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