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The Shortest Goodbye.
Contributed by
Sammys24
on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 07:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I lyed right on the floor
As you had one foot out the door
And I called for you
You turned around
My eyes lit up
With tears that hit the ground
I begged you to stay
But you chose to leave
Suddenly this way
Because you said you didn't feel the same
I called out your name
And just like that
You didn't look back
You left
With no second thoughts.
The shortest goodbye.
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Re: The Shortest Goodbye.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 10:08:01 AM AEST (User
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ao.. i like it.. keep on writing.. n_n |
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