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so lonely
Contributed by
rambo56
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Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 09:12:52 AM in AEST
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life can get so lonley when your on your own
theres no one to talk you feel so alone
wishing for some company someone to be there
someone you can talk too someone just to care
someone there to comfort you when your feeling blue
someone to confide in that can help you through
someone who will listen to what you have to say
just a bit of company to help you through the day.
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rambo56
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2010-05-30 09:12:52]
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Re: so lonely
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 01:21:37 PM AEST
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At times I think we all have these thoughts and feelings.
you did a great job of getting these feelings on paper.
goodwork.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: so lonely
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 02:30:20 PM AEST
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| I'm so used to reading your happy poems. But I've got to say that this is just as amazing. You captured the feeling of being lonely very well. Believe me, I understand the meaning of this poem all to well. Another poem of yours to add to the ever growing list of amazement that is your poetry!! |
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Re: so lonely
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 03:04:23 PM AEST
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| Having that special someone is very important and you have highlighted this very well in your poem, well written |
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Re: so lonely
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by hanasuru on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 03:33:43 PM AEST
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| I'm impartial to poems that flow well and have simple rhyme schemes. So, there's no surprise that I like reading stuff from you. Keep up the good work. |
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