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Something I should say
Contributed by
daniella
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Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 06:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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about the fingers that graze
the ashes of something that burns too long
collapsing beneath my hand
The embers have carried me to you
Something about the spindly black branches
and red autumn moon, harvesting thoughts
like laborious hands garner their reaping
I gather you against me
to have and to hold
Copyright ©
daniella
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2010-05-29 18:27:41]
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Re: Something I should say
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 12:52:08 AM AEST
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really nice descriptive piece of writting.
well done. |
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Re: Something I should say
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by spud on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 12:15:07 PM AEST
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Hi,
I applaud the way you express love. So unique,
so succinct, and metaphorically so different.
Well done!
Tommy
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