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My last goodbye
Contributed by
takeahittariq
on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 08:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I would watch you as you hopelessly crawl towards my feet
Pulling. Begging me to teach you...
I taught you well... I remember the way you would walk.
I was by your side. I remember the way you would talk.
I was by your side. You once thanked me for bringing you into this
Sweet, bitter world. Now you stand high, alone and I miss you.
It hurts to see how we once drifted apart
And now the thought of us together is lost.
I’m lost. No place to go. No answers. No direction.
My souls escaping and I’m letting you go with it.
Now everyday i wake up i hope I’m dreaming
You’ve turned your back
And now you’re leaving
So I guess nothing lasts forever
Because I was hoping we could watch this cloud pass by together....
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Re: My last goodbye
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by Tory on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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| A very emotional poem. hurtful, suffering, painful. has alot of heart very nice. |
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Re: My last goodbye
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by rambo56 on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 09:17:08 AM AEST
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| nice write nice words |
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Re: My last goodbye
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by jdwright on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 03:07:03 PM AEST
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| wow thats was awesome thanks |
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Re: My last goodbye
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by brialuv on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 03:36:22 PM AEST
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| wow beautiful poem...i love the ending "so i guess nothing lasts forever because i was hoping we could watch this cloud pass by together"...great job ! |
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