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TheRavages Of Time
Contributed by
Searcher
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Seems the ravages of time
Have taken their toll
To a life once sublime
Causing havoc with soul
Days that always bright
Seem to have disappeared
With pain through the night
The days ahead only feared
And a once bright outlook
Seems to be all but gone
And in my own little nook
I can only try to carry on
The body slowly giving in
The mind, seems lost track
Patience sometimes slime
As the mind wonders back
All of the many good times
These now thoughts of past
And of the pleasant chimes
It seems not meant to last
Ah! But life must go on
Though much harder to bare
A straight line not drawn
Life! I now handle with care
Life’s pains I can handle
I plan to put up a fight
And like a lost sandal
I’ll keep the pain and hurt…
… hidden from sight
(Oct.16th, 2002)
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:41:39 AM AEST
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| a wonderful write...well said...thanx for sharing... |
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:19:03 AM AEST
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| a sad piece,,but well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:16:43 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, full of emotions.
Courage my friend, you are not alone. |
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 09:11:33 PM AEST
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A tragic write, but wonderfully done...you seem to have done well, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:49:44 AM AEST
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| excellent title, i had to see this one, im so glad i did, the way you describe time is great, i follow along in your transition and find the lost sandal comparison brilliant, hugs nessa |
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Re: TheRavages Of Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:07:25 PM AEST
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Kudos to your writing skills!!!!
I loved it!!!!! :-) Sad but .....expressed courageously!
Angel always...Godspeed!!! |
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