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That Friday in May
Contributed by
soselfxconscious
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Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 04:52:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh, blissful Fridays, how they've changed so much
A relationship once burning with passion is
Now starting to sizzle out for such
A pathetic reason...my happiness is less important than his.
He's mad I'm staying late, so you dare ask me to leave?
My soul aches to tell you no, but I know that I cannot
I never knew his contentment was more valuable than me
Are you really that afraid of losing your connection to pot?
I fought back tears until the car ride home when you
Texted me, asking if I was okay. It was the first
Time I had to lie to you. I told you I was fine...but it was never true
I went home that night and sobbed for hours...a confused, silent outburst.
Our relationship has changed drastically in every way
And you're still unaware it's because of that Friday in May.
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2010-05-27 16:52:14]
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Re: That Friday in May
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by Tory on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 11:45:33 AM AEST
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| nicely put, alot of heartache and pain. have you told your boyfriend this if not you really should. very good poem.. |
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Re: That Friday in May
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 09:46:22 AM AEST
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The most gripping aspect of this passage is your sincerity
there are no words to comfort one in your place
there is no magic wand to manipulate truth
but your words are like a sword,sharpened by awareness
Honestly a touching piece
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: That Friday in May
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by Mexy on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 02:41:38 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry your boyfriend did this to you, but I liked how the poem told the story. The ending was especially well done. |
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