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River
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Down the river my life doth flow
Neath the frigid ice and snow
Just because my heart may mend
Doesn't mean the coldness ends
And just because my spirit heals
Doesn't mean I may suddenly feel
For numbing as the water is
i shall not give one quiver
I cannot feel the cutting rocks
That make the base of this river
The sun then shines
The ice, it thins
Suddenly now
I can breathe again
The water quickens
I laugh out loud
Help has come
Someone, somehow
Then the ground drops from my feet
The clouds hide the sun, so it does not see
I see the rocks, so far below
The sight makes time seem so slow
Now as I fall
i'll say goodbye
For this is the last time
You'll see me die.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2003-04-15 02:25:00]
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Re: River
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:42:02 AM AEST
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| a SAD & TOUCHING WRITE,BUT i LOVED THIS! THE WAY YOUR WORDS JUST FLOWED! CHRISTINA |
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Re: River
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 06:57:06 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt poem. So true and filled with raw emotions.
The Phantom |
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Re: River
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by hardcoreputa on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 07:08:26 PM AEST
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| great imagry i loved it ~Apryl |
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Re: River
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:58:37 PM AEST
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| excellent!! i love this poem!! ~hugs n' love nessa |
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