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in between the lines
Contributed by
eshine
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Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 09:41:49 AM in AEST
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oops
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There are times,
When every flash of my being
Is counted on the nervous
Reflection of life,
There are times,
When every cell of my being
Lives for the peace
That must come upon us,
There are times,
When my lung clenches into a stone
Unable to pulsate
To the agony we face,
There are times,
When all the energy surrounding me
Lifting me higher
To the rhythm of the wind,
And there are times,
When my being sees,
Our walk upon the thin line
Between misery and joy,
And when you stand,
In between those lines
With your naked flesh
That is the place you are set free
eshine, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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eshine
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Re: in between the lines
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by Tory on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 10:59:33 AM AEST
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| I really liked the emotion that you put in this poem. I could feel every pain and joy that was put in it. very good I loved it. Tory |
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Re: in between the lines
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 10:03:59 AM AEST
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very nice write... especially the part "our walk upon the thin line, between misery and joy"
because I believe most of the majority lives in that place... |
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