Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 11:38:40 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Summer City Evening

Contributed by dthomas89 on Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 01:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I work the graveyard
So my commute begins at nine
But its 80 degrees in Boston
So I'm feeling kinda fine

As I wait for my train
I smell something in the air
Good old subway popcorn
Reminds of the fair

I'm a waiting a few minutes
Cause the last train I missed
I see the heat of the tracks
And I've stepped in somones *****

The train as no AC
So there is sweat on my brow
The heat is getting to me
Only two stops now

The couples are dining
And the lonely men lurk
The city comes to life
While I'm going to work

Work is busy
And I had no warning
I can't wait to see
My summer city morning

dthomas89 PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Additionally, this does not apply to commenting on your own poem "Sitting and Thinking" and insulting other members of this site. Personal attacks and insults will not be tolerated at YPDC. Copy and paste this link into your browser on what Mick, the owner of this site, has to say about personal attacks.

http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=4695&start=0&sid=7616c5639b7cc37745711b92a619942d

Your comment on Sitting and Thinking has been removed. Demanding comments when you are not willing to offer comments on our other member's poems? By any chance, do you see any contradiction in that?

Copyright © dthomas89 ... [ 2010-05-26 01:33:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Summer City Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great job, Thanks for the read.

Always, abraham

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com