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All I'll ever be...
Contributed by
Holderofthestone
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Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 01:32:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hate that all I'll ever be,
is someone you're not with...
Copyright ©
Holderofthestone
... [
2010-05-26 01:32:16]
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Re: All I'll ever be...
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by DarkWolf on
Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 05:56:28 AM AEST
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short, simple, and to the point.
I like it two lines says all that there is to say. |
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Re: All I'll ever be...
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 09:21:44 PM AEST
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Oh My this tragic poetry. How very sad indeed!
Few words stuffed with meaning and tears!
I'm so sorry
Warm love
consue |
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Re: All I'll ever be...
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 09:55:36 AM AEST
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ouch.
Now this one is incredibly painful. It takes
much to fill a page with emotion using so
few words. The only other person I've know
to do this was Hemmingway. The pain here
is excruciating.
Excellent post! -- Achelois
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