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Rebirth
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:29:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Newborn ideas
quickly crawling on paper
soon learning life's walk
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-05-25 21:29:00]
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Re: Rebirth
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 02:07:42 AM AEST
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My problem is they crawl onto the paper and then fly away. I hate it when that happens. 
Thank you for once again provoking images into me mind. |
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Re: Rebirth
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 02:09:55 AM AEST
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| well done! a really well thought out short poem. |
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Re: Rebirth
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by Grace_and_Glory on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 02:37:55 PM AEST
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| oh that's good, so true! |
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Re: Rebirth
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 10:06:58 AM AEST
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| very nice...there is nothing like a fresh idea... |
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