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maudlin. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 03:17:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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to bleed with rose. . .
I, prickly. . . thus, out of red, rumors. . . vermilion. . .
deepens into crimson. . .
the finality of rosewood admonitioning in black. . .
becomes a time unto itself. . .
the fields rage with passing
the sun mourns
rumbling over echoes. . .
a bed derived of loss. . . humbled in the echoes. . .
of a time. . . fallen to loss
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2010-05-25 15:17:00]
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Re: maudlin. . .
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 01:20:19 PM AEST
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Dear Elle,
bathetic: effusively or insincerely emotional; "maudlin expressions of sympathy"; "mushy effusiveness"; "a schmaltzy song ...
I wasn't sure what your message was Elle so I looked up the definition of Maudlin.
I can feel your torment, and drunkeness with your horrible affliction!
You write is so deep, and sad......
Wonderful with words, and feelings, dying a final farewell!
Warm love
consue
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Re: maudlin. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 10:09:13 AM AEST
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| ao.. i like it.. keep on writing.. n_n |
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