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Another Fight, Another Poem
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 12:35:20 PM in AEST
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Kill me, kill me, make it hurt.
Take away the numb.
I can not find a single worth.
To live without no love.
I hate it when they always fight.
But still I hate me more,
Please, oh god, just let me die.
My death will be my cure.
This is what I hate the most.
The moments when they yell.
How can they not ever know,
There fight’s, they cause me hell.
Damn this life, and damn them too.
They did this all my life.
Why can’t they just get a clue?
Split up, and say goodbye.
I want to run so far away,
Away from all the hate.
I want to finally see the day,
Where I see heavens gates.
I’m begging you, I’m on my knees.
Oh God, I need your help.
I want my breath to finally cease.
I hate this life of hell.
I can not write another word.
Cause tears, they blur my eye’s.
I hope my prayer, you’ve finally heard.
I hope tonight I’ll die.
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Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-25 12:35:20]
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Re: Another Fight, Another Poem
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by Applethoughtrotten on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 03:16:10 PM AEST
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Wow....I felt your pain and anguish with every word and I am truly sorry. I tell those that will listen that death is never the answer. I too have felt the pull of death when things haven't been as I feel they should. Finally after 50 yrs I have adopted the philosophy. "There are many things I will never understand and I can't expect everyone or anyone to meet my expectations or I will never be happy. Therefor I just accept everyone as they are and love them inspite of themselves". Thankyou for revealing yourself in your words.
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Re: Another Fight, Another Poem
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by deepviolet on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 06:25:54 PM AEST
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i know just EXACTLY what you mean with this poem, in fact i even wrote my own poem when i was 14 on this site called "shouts" about the same situation.
luckily for me i never felt bad enough to want to die. but i can tell you this; i have left my parent's house now, went to college, and now i'm studying abroad in germany. my parents are still together, and still fighting, and i can't take it for very long when i visit, but it is not so bad now. life goes on, things change, and although i know it is terrible to live with pain that you know your loved ones cause, i swear it makes you stronger. i am glad i survived because it made me who i am: someone who won't ever give up.
i hope you find the same will to go on and remember, whatever anyone does to hurt you cannot affect your soul, deep down. you will always have yourself, and you are full of potential! |
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Re: Another Fight, Another Poem
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by Sheveg on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 01:46:17 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that your parents fighting makes you want to die. Have you ever told them how badly their fighting makes you feel?
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