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****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
Contributed by
tory
on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 12:39:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Let me rock your world,
put some love into your heart.
set your emotions free,
and tell you where to start.
Take my hand lead me on,
to where you want me to be.
I hope that it's a place,
and our souls can wonder free.
Hold me in your gentle arms,
for just a little while.
tell me something funny.
make me laugh or even smile.
tell me something special,
that I would love to hear.
tell me that you love me,
say sweet nothings in my ear.
Will you lay with me tonight,
will you share my dreams.
we're not doing any wrong,
much better than it seems.
Just one thing I need to say,
befor I let you go.
you will always be my baby.
and I really love you so....
,
Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 May 25, 2010
Tory, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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Re: ****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
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by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:16:03 AM AEST
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| Another fantastic poem Tory. I always enjoy reading your poems. I can feel the emotion you put into it, and it's wonderful. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: ****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
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by rambo56 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:24:01 AM AEST
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| enjoyed this poem nice write |
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Re: ****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
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by Potpourri on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 03:04:48 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful tory . . .
Potpourri |
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Re: ****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
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by Jessi95 on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:32:52 PM AEST
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| I love this poem it is so amazing =D |
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Re: ****** Let Me Rock Your World ******
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by Jessi95 on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:32:54 PM AEST
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| I love this poem it is so amazing =D |
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