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MY DREAMS
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 10:38:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I poured my orange juice as usual
and when I tasted it,
it tasted just like
a turnip!
I'm an early riser, early shower,
the shower head was
a beautiful pink
tulip.
Vanilla ice cream is my favorite,
I tried to eat it on this very
hot day, but it was a
white rose!
I turned on my fan for some relief,
but where were the airflows?
It was a sunflower and
My how it glows!
I'm in need of a drink so I poured
myself a bloody Mary
the glass was a
flower!
I suddenly felt quite ill as I watched
it change into a purple
feather!
I was in need of a good cold drink
of water from my well,
The windmill was
being turned
by a daisy!
And overhead a helicopter was
dropping paratroopers, and
their parachutes were
White Daisies
floating so
proudly!
I certainly hope my imagination stops soon,
My car is red with a large
sunflower for each
wheel!
I hope someone wakes me up
before the sun goes down,
It's a huge sunflower
with much sunset
appeal!
Created by
August 13, 2005
Restored
May 24, 2010
"Some men see things as they are
and say, "Why?" I dream of things
that never were and say, "Why not?"
~George Bernard Shaw~
(frequently attributed to Robert F. (Bobby) Kennedy,
who used it in a speech. His brother, Edward F. (Teddy)
Kennedy used this quote at RFK's funeral.)
*Dreamy Smiles*
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lovingcritters
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 12:22:38 PM AEST
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Funny. yOU Know what they ' folks that dream in color. Well I MUST BE NUTS TOO ;CAUSE i dream iN COLOR TOO.
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 12:56:45 AM AEST
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You have this ability of making me smile all throughout your wonderful poems, Consue. 
For some reason I'm in the mood for purple ice cream with yellow flower wheels in it now.  |
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:24:45 AM AEST
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| I loved this!! I smiled the entire time I reading this. You are so very talented. I love how you incorporate pictures into your poems. They add even more to an already amazing poem!! |
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by spud on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
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Hi,
Dreams and wishes, eh Connie?
Well I for one am glad that you have them
otherwise we would all be deprived of your
colourful and somewhat uplifting imagination.
Tommy
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 27th May 2010 @ 07:07:24 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery in this and the idea of exploring the imaginative mind,its great to have an imagination if somewhat impractical at times,you have combined ideas and imagery to produce another delightful poem that carries the consue warm heart with it x |
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by fish on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 12:23:22 AM AEST
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any time i read your poems i wish i could take a day or two to compose my comment on it.
you truly have a creative mind. i love colours and flowers so much, and your extensive use of these things just caught me by the sleeves. all the lines found a way of flowing into one another thus granting a smooth sail for the reader. the pictures that always accompany your poems, i just wonder. i love it, its beautiful |
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Re: MY DREAMS
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 30th May 2010 @ 09:52:20 AM AEST
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When imagination runs endless, that is when we know we
are blessed. What a vivid show you've placed here for us. It's
absolutely adorable. :) I especially LOVE the vanilla rose. :P
(and now I am in the mood for a cone). Wonderfully fun, this
was consue. I enjoyed it very much. And I adore the quote
at the end. What a perfectly worded and insightful opinion.
Wonderful post! -- M
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