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Pressure
Contributed by
spaceotter
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Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 06:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My enviroment has been raped by a cold
intrusion.
Cutting my soul and causing me to laugh.
I wonder what sparked this emotional
landslide.
What caused this mud to flow through my
mind...
Forcing blockage of my mental spring.
Swelling-
Swelling-
Swelling...
I think I will now explode.
Copyright ©
spaceotter
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2002-08-02 06:45:56]
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Re: Pressure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 06:49:33 AM AEST
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| Writers block or no, I love this piece. Just thought I'd say so. =) |
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Re: Pressure
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 01:58:52 PM AEST
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let the words flow... writer's block is HORRIBLE... this piece is probably easy for all of us to identify with! thanks for sharing this!!!
Gin |
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Re: Pressure
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 12:25:38 AM AEST
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An outstanding piece...I think we all probably dread writer's block...this one's going to stick in my mind I'm sure.
Chrissie |
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Re: Pressure
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by angelrae on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 07:30:26 AM AEST
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| I would have to say, this is not writer's block. It is a wonderful treaured poem. Thank you for a nice poem. |
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