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Contributed by Jack_Nasty on Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 07:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

He Is Labeled Broken, What's So Great About Hearts?
They Are So Out Spoken, He's Only Missing Parts
Incapable Of Love, But The Thought Will Be Retained
That One Day, Tying Down, This Tiger Can Be Tamed
He Recognized Devotion, Just Doesn't Give It Back
A Long Despised Type Notion, Another Thing He Lacks
A Wild Thing, A Wild Side, Accommodate Him According
A Mild Sting, An Idled Ride, To Where He Is Resorting
Out Of His Element, Dumped In Your Excuse Of One
Tries To Spot Your Reason, In The End Produced But None
He Liked To Climb Up high, You Ground Breathing Rodentia
You Stole His Mind, All Power, And Cast Him To Dementia
He's Forgotten Where He's From, And What He Had Desired
An Idea That Seen By Some, Has Left Them All Inspired
No Longings, No Nomadic Leap, There He Left His Heart
A Life He Once Called Home, That's Where He Left That Part
Label Him As Broken, Call Him What You Will
The Only One Not Spoken. There He Just Stands Still
Abiding, Not Biting, Just Riding Because He Is Defeated
A Very Sad Process Most Common, The Repeat It.
You Win...

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Re: Severe Reduction (User Rating: 1 )
by voyage on Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 05:14:25 PM AEST
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very powerful and beautiful. I really enjoy all of your poetry.

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