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Teddy Bear Eyes
Contributed by
DAylynn_Van_wyk
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Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 02:20:29 AM in AEST
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Aboard the blankets of serenity
drifting below the evening sky,
gentle like a breeze you are
dear teddy bear eyes.
You mold fantasy to life
sculpting bridges over doubt,
you speak little of the world
with love and senses in a twirl.
You know nothing,
yet you know it all,
your eyes see the beauty
and your ears hear it's call.
Your innocent curiosity
forever seeking joy,
you climbed the pillow mountains
making this haven your toy.
The simple pleasures feed your heart with joy
your simple tears outline every emotion….
Teddy bear eyes, rigid like majestic mountains
and your essence breathes in fountains
You then float down the streams of harmony
on a new adventure with no goodbyes,
Farewell sweet teddy bear eyes:)
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DAylynn_Van_wyk
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Re: Teddy Bear Eyes
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by fish on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 06:05:40 AM AEST
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i love your poem. it is beautiful. the added make-up (the rhymes) is beautiful too.
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Re: Teddy Bear Eyes
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by rambo56 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 09:26:21 AM AEST
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| lovely poem nice write |
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Re: Teddy Bear Eyes
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by spud on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 11:48:26 AM AEST
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Hi
Well said. A fine tribute to the serenity and
innocence of Teddy bear eyes.
The eyes have it!
Tommy
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