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OUR SHADOW
Contributed by
fish
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Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:17:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Without form, face nor frame
We still are the same
Much same to the colour of our skin
But light I love which you dread
He walk, stand and lay with me as one bound by oath
Starve, wine and dine with me till we both grow old
When I cry or merry you stay with me in both
A friend you truly are
Always that one who truly care
Who then cry of loneliness?
When our shadow offers homeliness
Who then cry of betrayal?
When our shadow offers faithfulness
Except one who himself is ungratefulness
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2010-05-23 04:17:31]
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Re: OUR SHADOW
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 01:12:29 PM AEST
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Dear Fish,
First I really appreciated the title. It remained your theme through out
A true friend no matter what, where, or all about!
I sense your loneliness, an actual cry........
and faithfulness by and by.......
Except one who himself is ungratefulness?
Very "thought provoking" poem, Fish,
I wish................you could be together all the time!
Warm love
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Re: OUR SHADOW
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 04:30:45 PM AEST
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