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YOUR LAST GOODBYE
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 12:56:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Many years ago
Everything seemed just fine
Those were our happiest days
But now they've been scarred by time
The wound's so deep, it cuts through my soul
And I still don't know why?
That you had to say your last goodbye
You meant the world to me
Someone I could depend
But now that you're gone for good
All I can do is pretend
My heart has sunk, I'm a broken man
No matter how many tears I cry
I still hear you say your last goodbye
If you told me where it started to go wrong
I could have tried to sort it out
But even if I did everything that I could
I would still have my doubts
I can't forget the past
There's a voice that won't let me go
I've tried my best to move on
But it's harder than you could know
Memories haunt me, your ghost I still see
Your words will stay 'til I die
I remember when you said your last goodbye...
I will never forget your last goodbye
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Re: YOUR LAST GOODBYE
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by rambo56 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:22:32 AM AEST
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| sad but good nice write |
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Re: YOUR LAST GOODBYE
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by Egor on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 10:36:49 AM AEST
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| that was very beautiful. also painful to read because it brings up my memories. either way, nicely done! |
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