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I want to be your best hello. And your hardest goodbye.
Contributed by
Fluxy
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 12:17:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Her touch is warm, to my cold skin. She rattles me from within. I love her so. Her words fill me with joy. Her eyes are emeralds. Her skin, divine. Her smell, Infectious. Her love. Irreplaceable. It's a shame I'm so ill equipped with words for her. So I'll leave as
"I love you my dear."
~Designed For Life, Ill Equipped For Death!~
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Re: I want to be your best hello. And your hardest goodbye.
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by FreeStyle on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 01:19:29 AM AEST
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| not ill equipt in the slightest,,, its hard expessing to someone you feel so strongly about how you feel. but thats how you know its real:) |
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Re: I want to be your best hello. And your hardest goodbye.
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by ExoM on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 08:11:18 PM AEST
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I like this poem!
REALLY good title. |
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Re: I want to be your best hello. And your hardest goodbye.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 04:19:44 PM AEST
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Have to agree...............great title and also great ending !!
I hope she was able to appreciate it.
Steve |
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