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Shards
Contributed by
Nova
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 11:16:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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There are cracks... A splintering
with shards of crystalline dreams
and charcoal regrets.
Pieces of the whole isolated
The view from above
Is so integrative...
It shows how all the fragments
so profound when below,
are insignificant in the grand, vast scenery
Perspectives to choose
or balance to achieve.
Neither is correct.
Both must exist for the other.
The truth is only
how you choose to see it.
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Re: Shards
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST (User
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Wow. Wonderfully profound and insightful. And done
with a beautiful poetic flavour that is delightful.
Excellent post! -- Achelois
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Re: Shards
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 02:45:15 PM AEST (User
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Again a line jumps out at me and I wish I could claim it as my own. :)
"shards of crystalline dreams
and charcoal regrets."
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