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Pain And Seduction
Contributed by
Jack_Nasty
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Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 09:06:08 AM in AEST
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Two dark sights on one face see
The first one be the seducer of me
All desire, and never control
Within this soul, another patrols
After seduction, soon follows pain
Displaying the rain to induce the insane
Both equal and opposite, can only suggest
Within this chest, lives one of the best
Seduction and pain in one mind see
Hand in hand be the deceiver of thee
Foolish, you think my mind is my own
It's very well known I don't live alone
No feeling inside, no sound for my voice
My mouth never moist, no freedom of choice
Invented illusions controlled by strings
All of these things, "perfection" he sings
My creator, controller, my holder of hearts
Yes, in this art, he plays all of these parts
Seduction and pain I do not see
Accept that it be black puppetry.
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Re: Pain And Seduction
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 10:55:47 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write describing the darker forces within of pain and seduction,compelled, controlled by strings,forcing desire not choice and the relationship between the two, great conclusion and an enjoyable strong indepth write |
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Re: Pain And Seduction
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by voyage on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 04:06:21 PM AEST
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Wow, what a piece! I love this poem.
Thank you! |
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