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Bird Brazen
Contributed by
screwge
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Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 01:17:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Bless this tepid scarecrow. A hummingbird
pilfered with an arrow
through its head had slipped the hands of sky
pirates. It wasn't even magpies--who knows
what populates the skies.
I like a painting of a still meadow, and I like
the jocund crow who takes long looks at
still things, waiting for the seepage
of movement, the weakness.
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Re: Bird Brazen
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 02:14:35 AM AEST
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a really well written poem.
love the style and look forward to more. |
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Re: Bird Brazen
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by rambo56 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:20:28 AM AEST
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| nice poem good write |
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Re: Bird Brazen
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by elle on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 10:37:41 AM AEST
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I always enjoy your poetry. I find it intriguing & moving & this particular one is no exception.
The significance is veiled & the intensity is evident but the overall effect is awe. Well done. elle :) |
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Re: Bird Brazen
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 11:51:35 PM AEST
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very interesting (in a good way), especially in the 2nd stanza.
i always enjoy ur abstract poems...
take care
-K.Z. |
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