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Starved
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 08:02:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Hollow promises cannot sustain me;
Hungry am I for honest sentiment,
To nourish my disheartened form----
To give me strength to face another day.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
... [
2010-05-21 08:02:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Starved
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 11:04:34 AM AEST (User
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There is nothing more mentally agonizing than being
"starved" for the comfort that comes from just one
sincere word. Good intentions are rarely enough. In
four short lines you've really built the emotion in this.
Excellent post. -- Achelois
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