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I wish my life was a fairy tale

Contributed by Courtz on Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 07:40:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I feel my heart breaking
As I look deep in your eyes,
I need to stop seeking
Because all I seem to say are goodbyes.

I always thought my life
Would be a fairy tale,
But that hasn’t happened
As I am so alone everyday.

Every guy I have been with
Are all annoying jerks,
I feel my heart going through a sieve
As all the guys can only give smirks.

I think I should lock myself in a room
So I can never love again,
This will be help me get away from my doom
But unfortunately my life has only begun.

It’s hard to face the facts
That you can’t live life in a perfect line,
Sometimes you will find bad impacts
Other times you’re fine.

Life’s road will be bumpy
So many objects in its way,
You will never know when it gets jumpy
But you always seem to pay.

So what does it always happen
Is fate caught in this game?
This seems to be the pattern
And it is causing me serious pain.

I always seem to get lost
In those eyes of yours,
It gives my heart cost
As it opens up my door more.

I need to move on now
Before it becomes too much,
I seem to answer ‘how’?
As this is hard as such.

You will break my heart again
As I know you can’t be mine,
I will have to use paper and pen
As I write a letter, the writing oh so fine.

As my heart goes down upon this letter
I move to another state,
I seem to feel so much better
As I know this is fate.

Know I will find a man
But obviously it wasn’t him,
I need a certain plan
It feels like a total sin.

My life is going slower
With no man yet by my side,
My heart is going lower
And is ready to hide.

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Re: I wish my life was a fairy tale (User Rating: 1 )
by SwitchbladeLoser on Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 03:27:39 PM AEST
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The words flowed very nicely together. The only thing I can point is the use of "annoying jerks" didnt quite fit the feel of the rest of the writing. On a side note, dont worry, most of us men are pigheaded and need to be brushed aside, unfortunately it is a learning process in finding the ones that arent.
On a further side note... When you do find one that is keepable dont stress the perfection issue. It puts a lot of strain on things.

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