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Boredom Stalls
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 09:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Graffiti walls in scribbled ink
Diagonal digits scratched in payback
Poetic sex etched in rambled rhyme
Cursive time killing flows against the paint
Stained crayon brightens the bland
Racist rolling tongues blot the vacancy
Faded swastikas carved with a point
Explicit lips drawn to draw a chuckle
Dated nicknames resting in peace
Gang insignia boasting of blocks
Confessions of punch line love
So and so was here jotted in jubilant print
A time warp of artists and poets
All strangers not knowing who wrote it
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-05-20 21:58:47]
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Re: Boredom Stalls
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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| Very Nice. It reminds me of years ago ^_^ |
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Re: Boredom Stalls
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by fish on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 12:40:38 AM AEST
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i am so plunge into the thoughts of the things we do because of situations. more of poem like this may help in redirection.
your poem is beautiful, the idea is splendid and you poem is poem
good piece |
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Re: Boredom Stalls
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by FreeStyle on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 12:58:05 AM AEST
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| i like your style. this poem expesses so much and gives space for the reader to feel between the lines:) keep it flowing;) |
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Re: Boredom Stalls
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by Breezy on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 10:49:39 AM AEST
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There is an exquisite emotion in the lines of graffiti;
more than in the empty thougths of passersby and
this piece more than amplifies that passion. Your style
is something to be admired and one that I adore coming
back to again and again. And your diversity of thought
continually floors me. Always something interesting
and poetically subperb on your page. A very fine read.
Sensational writing. Always. -- Achelois
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Re: Boredom Stalls
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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vivid images and well woven words,
hugs n' love nessa |
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