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An empty crashing blue
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 09:56:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The world is an empty fold of sky crashing—
A simple honeysuckle blue—
My fingers tremble and claw
At time
Confined
To slaver in desolation
To grow old
In the pains of my own declination
Of love
Ebbing, unforgivable love—breached, bloodied,
Broken at birth, wailing
Indefinable tears—the stars cast soft and cautious
Eyes upon me
A honeysuckle blue—
Simple trembling fingers
An empty crashing blue
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Re: An empty crashing blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 10:09:21 PM AEST (User
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Wow. This is a beautiful write full of stunning imagery that is precise and wonderfully written. There is a lightness in your words and i enjoyed this very much.
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Re: An empty crashing blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Debris on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 12:48:17 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful piece. Gripping yet gentle. Well done. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: An empty crashing blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by rambo56 on
Friday, 28th May 2010 @ 03:22:21 PM AEST (User
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nice write good words |
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Re: An empty crashing blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 08:28:09 PM AEST (User
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Stunning poem. Very thought-provoking imagery. |
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