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**** He Is Far From Perfect****
Contributed by
tory
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Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 06:16:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He always was a dreamer,
he loves to take a chance.
he would take a dare,
he sure does love to dance.
He is not a taker,
he has a heart of gold.
he will make you laugh,
keeps every secret ever told.
He can hold you tight,
he can make you smile.
he would make time,
to talk to you awhile.
He will lend a shoulder,
when you need a friend.
he is a protector,
he's there until the end.
He will dry those eyes,
wipe away your tears.
hold you when you're scared,
and chase away your fears.
Gee, this guy sounds perfect,
he's not but he should be.
the reason that I know this,
this man belongs to me.
To my husband Jerry
Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 May 21, 2010
Tory PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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Re: **** He Is Far From Perfect****
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by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 11:16:44 AM AEST
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| Congratulations on not only finding a wonderful man, but also for writing an amazing poem!! |
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Re: **** He Is Far From Perfect****
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2010 @ 01:00:17 AM AEST
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No one is perfect but I think sometimes when we find someone, they can be perfect for us. That's what you did with this one..you conveyed that very well.
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