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Extra
Contributed by
spaceotter
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Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 06:45:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dropping glances at the sunlight that just
filtered into the room.
She's distantly thinking about a world of which
I am clueless.
Oh, to be a part of that world,
To wallow in its worries.
What burns to emit her chaotic energy?
What is its focus-
And how does she manipulate?
How I crave to burn in the path of her power.
What rapturous ecstasy it would be to know
this extra in the play of my life.
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spaceotter
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2002-08-02 06:45:16]
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Re: Extra
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 02:52:11 PM AEST
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spaceotter,
I loved this... great concept
"this extra in the play of my life"
Awesome line and awesome poem
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Re: Extra
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 02:58:55 PM AEST
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oh this is deep... I like it... I have to agree with Daniela... I love that last line!!! Thanks for submitting this... It made me smile... (I needed that!)
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Re: Extra
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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I agree with the first two comments!! Your poetry is a pleasure to read.
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