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The Man He Thought He Knew
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 09:00:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Hidden in the darkness.
A monster in your eye's.
Living in the harshness,
of all your evil lies.
How you think you know me.
My life and all my sins.
I wish you'd let me be.
Your voice now makes me sick.
Hardened by your judgment.
Swimming in your doubt.
Locked inside a dungeon.
There seems to be no out.
Years have turned me colder.
There's no more warmth inside.
Hatreds made me bolder.
I speak what's on my mind.
Blood and death and carnage,
is all I long to see.
You'll never get a harness,
on what was good in me.
I've taken one to many.
One to many blows.
And now I'll show you plenty,
of the evil I now hold.
Take your shot at fighting.
You'll never stand a chance.
I'll relish all your whining.
So come on, take your stance.
Oh, now I see you shaking.
Tell me, are you scared?
I wonder if your faking.
But wait, I see your tears.
So, so, so pathetic.
That's what you've come to be.
It's your fault I'm eccentric.
It's your fault that I seethe.
So why can't I deliver,
the final fatal blow?
Why do I now shiver?
Why, I do not know.
I leave you torn and battered.
But soon, you'll be yourself.
Why to me it matters,
makes my mind now dwell.
With all that I have suffered.
With all the blows I took.
Why could I not muster,
to kill the man who shook?
He had the chance to kill me.
I could have killed him to.
But than I'd truly be,
the man he thought he knew.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-20 09:00:11]
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Re: The Man He Thought He Knew
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 04:33:50 PM AEST
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Your ending gave me goosebumps and lots of troubled thoughts NConnie........How many times have we each found ourselves in such a fix............evil, revenge, integrity, the whole mix?
Well said, well penned!
Warm love
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Re: The Man He Thought He Knew
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by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on
Monday, 31st May 2010 @ 07:18:03 AM AEST
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| I really love this and the last couple of lines totally sealed the deal :) Good luck with all your future writing! |
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