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slowly down sunday
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 02:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Slowly down sunday the old man walks with weather beaten cheeks
Down the dreary south London back streets
He looks like the lonlinest man in the world,
Slowly down sunday on his face not a smile but a grimace has curled.
Slowly down sunday he walks by the river in the park
and stays in silence untill the afternoon sky grows dark
Watching the murky water has it laps at the dirty old shore,
Slowly down sunday he's never felt quite so lonely before.
Slowly down sunday he makes his weary way back home
Through the dreary south london back streets feeling lost and alone,
But tomorow is a new day and he'll be raring to go,
Slowly down sunday oh how he hates it you know.
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cashfan1
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2010-05-20 02:34:16]
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Re: slowly down sunday
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 11:53:42 AM AEST
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What a wonderful and imaginative title, and theme!
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! this poem was written with the rhymn completely Slowly Down Sunday. I loved your description of the old man, his face, his actions. You made him come alive for me.
You have much talent, and we're so glad to have you aboard to join us here at YPDC!
WELCOME.............
Warm love,
lovingcritters
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Re: slowly down sunday
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 07:36:14 PM AEST
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I like this.
Slowly down sunday...
makes me happy |
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