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Waking
Contributed by
navydocny
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 07:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Devine, the want, what all hath had….
To never have what all dreams bring
At once her breath, constrained love mad
Her kiss, the lover’s mortal sting…
As mother, lover, her God’s embrace
Seraphim grant as none shall give
Her breath of life, my soul doth race
To a given life that bequests to live
Enrapt a once lowly soul to keep
To show what is and what could be
Such plunder a fortunate sort may reap
If wondrous dreams are set free
Once a stir from a death-like slumber
To wake to thoughts I must encumber
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Re: Waking
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 09:10:39 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Good work.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Waking
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 12:19:07 AM AEST
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brilliant write, i digg your writin style
and i look forward to your next poem.
Take care:) |
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Re: Waking
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by omeoteotl on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 12:21:59 PM AEST
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| Sir, you are impressive. |
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Re: Waking
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 20th May 2010 @ 12:37:36 PM AEST
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| really well written I like your writing style very much. look forward to more. |
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Re: Waking
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 10:17:19 PM AEST
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so beautiful, dreamie and smooth, leaves one feeling peaceful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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