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Rush Hour
Contributed by
Daggers
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Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 01:47:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Traffic flows
like blood through a vein
cells of cars and human sparks
pushing and pouring
through rocks and rapids
each to be first
in their early day rush
I watch in slow motion
the heart as it pumps
the river as it flows
I am not amongst them
and if I were, I'd wish that I weren't
yes I am free
but I still long to belong
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Re: Rush Hour
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 07:44:37 PM AEST
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Great job, Thanks for the read.
Always, abraham
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Re: Rush Hour
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 06:57:41 PM AEST
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I very much enjoyed reading this. Keep it up.
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