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The Junk Yard
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 08:02:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cream-colored coffee can—corrugated aluminum skies break beveled stars across your exterior, scatter modeled faces scratched eerily vague with age and the thrust of time, paired with your decubitus slumber.
Spin blue silver lid and clouds, plain ovulated cylinder of concrete and bee weathering the rain and the windows of the rain scattered across stone and metal. Spin blue, the sky against your black sari, draped at the edge of your illustrious levee, the rain pattering at the depressions of your figure passing by.
Time discards us all.
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iodinelove
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2010-05-18 20:02:09]
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Re: The Junk Yard
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 07:07:18 PM AEST
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This one knocked me for a loop! I could picture everything, and took it all in, and then the end took me by complete surprise!!! It was riveting, and very moving, to say the least! Yes, Abraham you are a wonderful writer, and I loved reading every minute ot it!
Keep up the good work friend.
Warm love
consue
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Re: The Junk Yard
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by Smigit on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 06:47:52 PM AEST
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| This has the essence of a daydream. Very nice. :) |
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