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Venomous Treason
Contributed by
mind_me
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 04:14:10 PM in AEST
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Trapped in my own little box again
corrosive poison I am to myself
eating me up inside
like acid corrupting the skin.
Want to dilute this disease,
yet need it,
another part of me
like an arm with claws,
a Siamese twin
slowly poisoning me...
...been holding on to things too long.
Got to tame that perfectionist.
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Re: Venomous Treason
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 05:55:29 PM AEST
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Oh No, not another perfectionist!
But perfect is your poetry.......so keep writing perfectly........and you'll be home free!
Very good work
Keep it up.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Venomous Treason
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by omeoteotl on
Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 06:28:41 PM AEST
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| i like it... keep writing... hope to see more of your posts... |
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Re: Venomous Treason
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 07:09:14 AM AEST
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Love these lines:
"another part of me
like an arm with claws,
a Siamese twin "
Very expressive and the entire poem was heartfelt. Nice write. |
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