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***The Loss Of The Mind***
Contributed by
Tory
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 12:45:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you ever sit and think,
just what comes to mind?
Do you dig a little deeper,
just to see what you can find?
I know you've been at a place,
a thought that's in the middle.
please don't take this as a joke,
and no it's not a riddle.
What about the special things,
you hide and lock away?
Just so you will have them,
to brighten up your day.
They say as you get older,
your mind is the first to go.
it takes a little longer,
it's not gone it's just got slow.
At first they blame it on your age,
but what comes after that.
Conversations with your self,
some call you an old bat.
So if you have a loved one,
that have issues with the mind.
it is time for you to step in,
it's help they seek to find.
Copyright ©
Tory
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2010-05-18 12:45:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ***The Loss Of The Mind***
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 09:47:21 AM AEST (User
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this really is a thought provoking piece of writing. Really well written and complely on the mark, well done.
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