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Inside My Head
Contributed by
Whyme46
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 09:26:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When we first met she was a sight unseen
She was in a bottle, I was just a teen
I'd take her out at night and we'd have some fun
but she was never meant to be my only one
She became my courage when I was afraid
I thought when she was with me I had it made
One day I got to know her in another way
When I sat down at a table where she made me pay
I began to need her but she didn't need me
Man was I blind to what the others could see
I know I'm not the only one she's caused a lot of pain
She takes away everything while running through your vain
No matter how much you try it's hard to walk away
Knowing she's in your head and coming back someday
Some think they can play with her, think their going to win
But I tell you she's a killer, you can call her addiction
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Re: Inside My Head
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 09:39:56 AM AEST
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A brilliant piece of writing. And you couldnt be more correct. I know exactly what you are saying here. Great job and keep up the good work.
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Re: Inside My Head
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by Cayleigh-Chan on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 06:19:02 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write!
At first I was wondering which addiction you were talking about, as she comes in different forms.
I smiled when I realized the ending summed the whole thing up for me, and gods is it true. |
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