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Signs & Wonders
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 06:38:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On a distant beach
in a bottle’s neck
a message
‘not what you expect’
On a far flung moon
in a crater’s maw
an alien glyph
‘Oh, what I saw’
In a child’s eyes
life held anew
a reminder
‘magic happens too’.
Copyright ©
spike
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2010-05-18 06:38:51]
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Re: Signs & Wonders
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 07:26:41 AM AEST
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oh wow! this is excellent! i actually got goosebumps reading the last line! lol, so beautifully written, just perfect:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Signs & Wonders
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by spud on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 07:54:25 AM AEST
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Hi Spike
''There's a one-eyed yellow idol to the north of
Kathmandu ...etc...etc...''
Can't help thinking about Kipling's poem when I
look at your graphic ..... anyway, I digress .....
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A short sharp and intelligent piece of verse.
Observance is the key. If we only see what we
want to see, then we'll miss so much.
Well scribed, scribe.
Tommy
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Re: Signs & Wonders
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by elle on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 01:37:25 PM AEST
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Wow Spike,
I don't know how I missed this gem. I really love It. It's simplicity is so complex. Here's your sign ~ Smiles~
elle :) |
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Re: Signs & Wonders
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by kmarie on
Friday, 4th June 2010 @ 07:55:38 PM AEST
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| wow. just wow. this is such an amazing poem and their are no words for me to describe it! But I love it though. |
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